WWW:
- Intriguing storyline
- Typical thriller theme - murder inquiry
EBI:
- Some questioned how we will ensure that such an intriguing plot will materialise into a quality thriller opening; e.g. it would be better to logically work through the story, by having just one murder rather than numerous ones at the beginning, and then the subsequent police investigation.
- We need to improve and work on the storyline to ensure its practical
There were no particular questions asked by the audience, only some suggestions on how it could be improved, which have already been mentioned.
How will the above suggestions shape our concept for the thriller opening?
- We will be able to integrate the above ideas into our original idea for the film.
- We will be able to keep the concept of murder inquiry as the basis for the film, but our intention is for the feedback from the class presentation to be utilised effectively in improving the practicalities of the filming process.
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